题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.
Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or a teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.
[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2.然后以约120个词就“努力学习,快乐生活”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:
(1)你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗?简要阐述理由。
(2)举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的?
(3)简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活?
[写作要求]
在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中
的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准] 概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
答案
Study hard and enjoy yourselves
The author highlights the effect of work on people’s health, because it can rid one of loneliness, and make one feel fruitful and proud of himself, which always contributes to a good body.
In common with the author, I agree that the harder you work, the happier you will be, as hard work can keep a person busy, give one a sense of achievement, and therefore he will be self-confident and feel happy.
Around me, some of my classmates work very hard, hoping to fulfill their dream. However, they don’t seem unhappy. Oppositely, they try to find fun even under the pressure of the NMET. For example, they may share the joy with others when working out a problem. Sometimes they may play a trick on his partner using the newly-learned idioms, thus refresh themselves quickly.
As for me, I think only when we truly experience what fun it is, can we spare no effort to study hard and meanwhile enjoy ourselves.
解析
试题分析:题目要求用30个词概括短文大意,然后以“努力学习,快乐生活”为题,写一篇作文。作文可以分为三部分来写,第一部分赞同该观点并阐述理由;第二部分举例说明同学的做法;第三部分简述如何做到努力学习和快乐生活。使用第一人称进行写作,不要出现标点、拼写和时态错误。
【亮点说明】范文注意使用and therefore, However, Oppositely, For example, Sometimes, thus, and meanwhile等衔接上下文,使作文看起来行文流畅、语意连贯;
范文使用了一些重要语法知识:宾语从句I agree that the harder you work, the happier you will be;固定句型 the harder you work, the happier you will be;非谓语动词hoping to fulfill their dream,using the newly-learned idioms;倒装句式only when we truly experience what fun it is, can we spare no effort to study hard等,语法知识掌握扎实,重点语法知识的使用,使作文提高了等级;
范文还使用了一些短语和固定搭配:share the joy with others;working out;play a trick on;As for me等,使作文较为充实。
核心考点
试题【Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women.】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
必要性:手机是人们联系工具之一
颜色:黑色和白色 功能:收发短信,照相,上网,下载音乐,浏览网页……
其他:MP4, 自选游戏……参考词汇:浏览 browse
注意:1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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1. 描述你身边的一些浪费现象;
2. 说明浪费的危害性及节约的重要性;
3. 反省你自身的浪费行为并提出改进措施。
注意:
1. 词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
Put an end to waste on campus
Nowadays wasting is common on campus. __________________________________________________________
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[写作内容]
请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
竞选职位:学校英语俱乐部副主席 个人优势: (1)性格外向、与人相处融洽 (2)善于组织各种活动 中选后决心:协助主席,服务同学 中选后设想:举办讲座、英语晚会、英语演讲比赛等活动来提高同学英语水平,激发学习兴趣 表达愿望:希望同学们投票选你,相信你能干好工作 |
[写作要求]
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
2.短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总句数。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Jin.
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Thank you.
One day, while she was walking in the woods, a girl found two starving songbirds. She took them home and put them in a small cage. She cared them with love and the birds grew strong. Every morning they greeted her with a wonderful song. The girl felt great love for the birds.
One day the girl left the door to the cage open. The larger and stronger of the two birds flew from the cage. The girl was so frightened that he would fly away. As he flew close, she grasped him wildly. Her heart felt glad at her success in capturing him. Suddenly she felt the bird go limp. She opened her hand and stared in horror at the dead bird. Her desperate love had killed him.
She noticed the other bird moving back and forth on the edge of the cage. She could feel his great need for freedom. He needed to soar into the clear, blue sky. She lifted him from the cage and tossed him softly into the air. The bird circled once, twice, three times.
The girl watched delightedly at the bird"s enjoyment. Her heart was no longer concerned with her loss. She wanted the bird to be happy. Suddenly the bird flew closer and landed softly on her shoulder. It sang the sweetest melody that she had ever heard.
She finally realized that the fastest way to lose love is to hold on it too tight, the best way to keep love is to give it WINGS!
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2. 然后以约120个词就 “爱就要放手” 这一主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:
a) 以自己为例,简述生活中你父母对你的过度关注;
b) 你父母的做法对你造成了什么不良的影响;
c) 如果有机会,你会就此问题对父母说些什么
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
1.宠物过多,噪音扰民; 2. 污染环境; 3. 不少人尤其孩子曾被惊吓或咬伤;4. 传播疾病。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.信的开头和署名已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.
Yours faithfully,
Zhang Hua
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