题目

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“中国梦”已经成为一个社会热点话题，根据最近央视的社会调查，不同的人群有不同的梦想。请结合表格提示，用英语写一篇关于“中国梦(China Dream)”的演讲稿。

不同人群	梦想
城市居民	交通…、环境…
大学生	就业…、食品…
农民	教育…、医疗…
你的梦想	（请考生根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两个梦想）

 
注意:
1. 对所给提示逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150 左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
China Dream
“China Dream” has become a hot topic among Chinese people. According to a recent survey by CCTV, different groups of people have different dreams.

答案

                          Chinese Dream
“Chinese Dream” has become a hot topic among Chinese people. According to a recent survey by CCTV, different groups of people have different dreams.
Urban residents dream of having easy access to modern transportation so that life will be easier and more convenient. Besides, they hope to enjoy a better living environment and more public facilities. What college students are mainly concerned about is employment. So their dream is to have well-paid jobs where they can bring their potentials into full play. Meanwhile, they hope the government will strengthen its supervision over food so that people can have more pollution-free and green food. When it comes to the farmers, they hope that they can enjoy good and affordable medical care and their children can receive a good education.
As far as I am concerned, my dream is to be enrolled by a good university and be a talent who can make contributions to my country. Besides, I dream there to be practical reforms in education so that high school students have enough time to sleep and exercise.

解析

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】Urban residents dream of having easy access to modern transportation so that life will be easier and more convenient. 这句话用了so that引导的结果状语从句， What college students are mainly concerned about is employment. 这句话是主语从句，So their dream is to have well-paid jobs where they can bring their potentials into full play. 这句话里面有不定式做表语，和地点状语，When it comes to the farmers, they hope that they can enjoy good and affordable medical care and their children can receive a good education.这句话是When it comes to这个句型，my dream is to be enrolled by a good university and be a talent who can make contributions to my country. 这句话里面有定语从句，还有Besides, Meanwhile, As far as I am concerned,这样的关联词使文章更连贯。