题目

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现在许多年轻人对友谊的认识存在一些误区。有些人认为能与你经常呆在一起的人便是朋友，有些人认为能经常一起吃吃喝喝的人是朋友，另一些人则认为能帮你隐瞒错误、逃避责任的人是朋友。你怎么看待这些观点？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对朋友的看法。
朋友应该：1.诚实可信； 2. 乐于助人； 3. 相互尊重； 4. 志趣相投； 5.具有爱心
注意：1. 词数：150左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays many young people have some misunderstanding about friendship.
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答案

Nowadays many young people have some misunderstanding about friendship.
Some say they will make friends with those who can often stay with them. Some think if a person can eat out with them, he or she is a friend. Others argue that someone who can help them escape punishment when they make a mistake is a friend.
Personally, I don’t agree with the above opinions. What makes a really good friend then?
First, your friend must be honest. They must always tell you the truth, even when the truth might not be what you want to hear. Second , a friend should be helpful and always willing to lend a hand . Favors should be done with gladness. Next, true friends respect each other. A friend should treat you the way they want to be treated. Also, sharing some interests is pretty important when it comes to friendship. Last but not least, a friend should be kind and should love you for who you are.

解析

试题分析：本文是一篇给材料作文。在写作之前必修认真审题。
1、注意文章的时态。谈谈对朋友的看，是我们生活中的一个常见问题，所以要用一般现在时。
2、确定要点：①有些人认为能与你经常呆在一起的人便是朋友 ②有些人认为能经常一起吃吃喝喝的人是朋友 ③另一些人则认为能帮你隐瞒错误、逃避责任的人是朋友 ④用一句话过渡到发表你对朋友的看法 ⑤朋友要诚实可信 ⑥朋友要乐于助人 ⑦朋友要相互尊重 ⑧朋友要志趣相投 ⑨朋友要具有爱心。
3、写作时适当添加细节，来满足字数要求。
4、注意句子的衔接，使用一些高级词汇及短语，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】
1、写作中注意了表达的多样性，如第一段中：Some say…, Some think…, Others argue that,用了三个不同的词来表达“认为”这个意思。
2、段与段之间过渡自然。第三段，发表自己看法时，以personally导入，读起来流畅。
3、恰当使用从句，提高了文章的档次。第一段中两个定语从句：who can often stay with them, who can help them escape punishment; 一个状语从句：when they make a mistake。第四段中：一个表语从句：what you want to hear；一个高级的定语从句：the way they want to be treated；一个状语从句：when it comes to friendship。一个介词后的宾语从句：who you are。