题目

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请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down  walls
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右。­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­

答案

Smile has magical power. I think it can drive winter from people’s face.
I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in this new school several months ago, when I found it difficult to follow my English teacher in the first English class. The teacher spoke English throughout the class, which was totally different from the lessons I had taken before. In the morning class the next day, the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students. After listening to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. The smile shined the whole day and the following days. A week later, I volunteered to take charge of English study in my class.
Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class, I begin to become confident.

解析

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是叙述一件事情来反映主题，所以要用一般过去时。但本文必须用第一人称。再有就是应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如drive from，volunteer，take charge of等和find it + 形容词 + to + v句型等。还运用了which引导的定语从句，after 与现在分词连用，when引导的时间状语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如：thanks to，a week later等等。