题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
你的文章应包括下列要点:
①张方和李华发生争吵 ②你帮助解决矛盾 ③你的看法
注意:①文章的标题和开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
②参考词汇: harmonious adj. 和谐的 dormitory n.宿舍
Creating a Harmonious Environment
Nowadays, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels.
答案
Creating a Harmonious Environment
Nowadays, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels. Last Tuesday Zhang Fang stayed up doing his homework after 10:30 pm in the dormitory. Feeling tired, Li Hua went to bed immediately. But he couldn’t fall asleep with lights on. He got so angry that he lost his temper, complaining about Zhang’s selfishness. Neither of them would give in and the quarrel continued.
While they were quarreling, I tried to calm them down, saying all of us should care about others. They realized their faults and made up finally.
After all, we share the same school and everyone is part of the big family. Whenever we face any problem, we should learn to understand and communicate with each other. Only when we think more for others can we create a harmonious environment.
解析
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类书面表达,文章的要点也基本上都给出来了,但是不是很具体,考生要把要点解释清楚,不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外,还要阐述自己的观点,这就要求考生自己拓展发挥,在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些词组和句型: stayed up熬夜,give in 屈服,calm sb. down使…冷静下来, care about关心, made up组成,After all毕竟, Feeling tired, Li Hua went to bed immediately. 这句话用了现在分词做状语,But he couldn’t fall asleep with lights on. 这句话用了with复合结构,He got so angry that he lost his temper, complaining about Zhang’s selfishness. 这句话用了so…that…从句和现在分词做状语, Whenever we face any problem, we should learn to understand and communicate with each other. 这句话用了让步状语从句,Only when we think more for others can we create a harmonious environment. 这句话用了倒装句。
核心考点
试题【目前,大多数高中生选择住校。在寝室里同学们难免会发生一些小摩擦。上周二晚上十点半,张方和李华争吵(张方熬夜学习,李华认为影响睡觉......),你当时在场,帮助】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
要求:1. 有明确的计划和相应的理由
2. 字数:100左右。
3. 开头句已写好,不计入字数。
Labor Day is coming and we’ll have three days off. |
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肯定此次活动的重要性;
怀念与他们相处的快乐时光;
表达对他们的感谢和希望。
注意:①开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
②字数100字左右。
③可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and friends,
It is my great privilege to __________________________________________________
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1. 本人简介;2. 求助内容; 3. 约定时间;
4. 你的联系方式(Email: lihua@1236.com; Phone:12345678)
注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
内容要点:
1. 感谢父母多年来, 特别是高三这一年来的关怀。
2. 向父母简要汇报自己的学习情况。
3. 高考之后帮父母做些家务和自己的打算。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear parents,
Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously.
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Yours
LI Hua
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