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书面表达（本大题有1小题，共15分）
近来，一系列事情的发生使得Li Ming 开心不起来。你作为他的朋友想帮帮他。你可以选取下列Li Ming 所发生事件的其中一件，适当发挥想象，写一篇60-80词的小短文，发表自己的看法。开头已写出，不计入总词数。
⑴最近，Li Ming 喜欢上了打电脑游戏，常常熬夜，导致第二天显得疲倦，学习不认真；
⑵Li Ming的英语一直不是很好，上星期的英语考试又不及格。
⑶Li Ming 的妈妈给他制定了严格的家规：不许熬夜，不许打电脑游戏，周末不许外出，晚上必须呆在家里等。
     I’m Wang Tao. Let me help you. …                                       
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                           

答案

I’m Wang Tao. Let me help you. Maybe every teenager likes playing computer games, but we shouldn’t play computer games too much. You’d better not stay up too late. You need to have enough sleeping time, so you can be energetic enough to study tomorrow. And you should concentrate more on your study because you are still a student. It’s our duty to study well. I hope you will be good at your study again soon.                                                                    
                                                                            
Another possible version:
   I’m Wang Tao. Let me help you.  First of all, please don’t worry your English too much. I think you failed the English test just because you played computer games too much and you stayed up too late. Don"t do that again. If you can pay more attention on English,, you will get better grades soon. After all, your English was not bad before.     I hope you can get up early and do morning reading every day. Listen to the teacher carefully and make grammar notes. Also, do homework carefully , so you can make fewer mistakes. Believe yourself !                                  

解析

试题分析：本文的写作可以选取一个话题进行阐述。首先对出现的问题进行说明，引出所要表达的内容，然后对于这一项现象提出自己合理的建议，对这一部分需要重点的说明，可以从三个方面进行表达，对所提的表达之间注意使用合适的连词来表达更为准确的意思，是文章富于变化和条理。最后表达对他的希望或是祝福。
点评：初中英语的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。对于中考的作文，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文。在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。