题目

谁能帮我批片雅思作文.
There is much discussion nowadays as to whether or not to fixed punishments for different kinds of commit crime.Diverse contributing factors can be identified.Personally,the circumstance of an individual crime,and the motivation for crime should play an indispensable role in criteria.
Firstly,fixed punishment will have deterrent effects on society,and it is entirely inequitable to punish criminals.The benefit is that fixed legal punishment acted as a deterrent role in the censorship.Contrary,the risk is that punish criminals fully in accordance with the law which disregard the fairness and lose humanization.A typical example can be found in the law case,a law-breaker was just use justifiable defense to treat the thief,now that generally the harsh realistic are directly linked the criminals to the imprisonment.Consequently,we must take the scope of individual factors into consideration.
Secondly,it is unquestionably tired to signify that the criminal personal sit

提问时间：2021-04-01

答案

我帮你把作文输入了句酷批改网,分数是7分,系统显示没有拼写错误啊,但有许多“中式英语”,系统认为你写的文章不够地道啊