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希望有英文好的老师帮帮我修改一下我自己写的一个小段,是用来做论据用的关于Rosa Park的.
In
1955,there was a black woman standing
up to be the first person to fight for black’s rights.She was Rosa Parks,who
refused to obey the bus driver’s order that gave up here seat to make room for
a white passenger.Rosa Parks was arrested because of her resistance to the
society’s rules.At that time,blacks
were discriminated and their positions were low and ignored.Rosa Park’s brave
resistance made society thought the segregating problems considerately.Finally
the boycott ended when the Supreme Court ruled that the segregation laws on the
buses were illegal.Rosa
Parks inspired MLK and others to protest
for equal rights in American.She was remembered for standing up for what she
believed inspiring others to change the world for better.
第三行有一处打错,是gave up her seat.
希望可以帮忙改改除了语法问题,还有深度问题,就是论证的时候还加些什么比较好

提问时间：2021-03-18

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