题目

My composition,Who can help me correct the mistake?
My name is liuxing who is a new student in Grade One from XinHua higher school.Todan is my first day at senior high,I am glad to study here.The teachers are enthusiastic and the students are very friendly.There are severals sujects in our school,such as Chinese,physics,biology and so on.Besketball,drama and
computerare the school's most popular extracurricular acitivits
想睡觉了，边打边睡，造成严重后果
My name is liuxing who is a new student in Grade One from XinHua higher .Today is my first day at senior high,I am glad to study here.The teachers are enthusiastic and the students are very friendly.There are several sujects in our school,such as Chinese,physics,biology and so on.Basketball,drama and
computer are the school's most popular extracurricular acitivits(课外活动）。
我也不想罗里罗嗦，这篇是任务型作文，只能用5个句子。其中，还要注重复合句的运用。

提问时间：2021-03-02

答案

My name is LiuXing who is a new Grade one student in XinHua High School.Today is my first day in the new school,(因为先前已经说了学校名,所以这里就不用重复了)i am glad to study in this high school and i feel excited.I find that the teachers are enthusiastic and people around me are friendly.(这里就用周围人来代表)There are more subjects in High School as compare to Secondary School,(在高中里的科目和中学比起来多了很多)such as Biology,Physics,English and so on.Basketball,Drama Club and Computer Club(club指社团)are the most popular co-curricular activities(我学校就用这个,co就是指附带的.不过我想和那个extra...的差不多).
要相信我哦~保证对!