题目

请帮我看看这篇英语作文是否有语法错误,求指导!
My idol is Edward Elric.He is the mian character in Fullmetal Alchemist which is one of the most famous Japanese animes.His mother died because of disease when he was only a little child.He and his brother Alfons Elric were so sad that they decided to use the alchemy to make their mother.But they failed.They only made a monster.And Edward even lost his left lag and Alfons lost his body.Edward used his right to let Alfons’s soul stay in an armour.Then Edward installed the mechanical legs and arms and stat the long journey which he wanted to find the way to get their real bodies back with his brother.That time he was only fourteen .And he became the yongest alchemist in his world.In the end of story,they succeeded in getting their bodies back and they became brave and adamancy.Edward was a boy who never gave up.And in his story,I also learnt an important thing.Love and life can not be back again when once you lose or throw it.So we should treasure love and lif

提问时间：2021-01-15

答案

第一行miam——main,第三行a littie child-----a young child,第八行yongest------youngest,第九行in his world------in the world,你几乎没用什么高级语法,我看过觉得语法没什么错误,但词汇有待加强