题目

雅思作文,马上就要考雅思了目标6分 这样的作文能得多少分
Some people spend more time reading books,while others prefer to watch
TV.The former group are more likely to develop creative imaginations and have a
much better grasp of language skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
nowsdays ,some people perfer read books while others watch differnecen type of movies and TV shows to gain their knowledges,as well as progress creative and language skills .Pesonally,I agress people can get more expression through out reading books to some extent .
It is evidently reasonable for some to argue that books developed our creative side.when reading a book,brain try to translates the images so we can go into the stories make ourselves enjoy the books more by thinking about the images .In contrast,when poeple watching TV,the picture already has given out and then we know the actual looks.Also our mind is relaxing as well ,we cannot learn anything from TV .For example,novels usually describe a wonderful place using difference type of word then we image the blue sky,green stream we create imagination .
Secondly,books teach us language skills .In the other word,they teach us how the sentences structured .In present days ,most all high school students have to read books and write reviews as part of their education learning in language subject.Books help us developed both vocabouray and language skills.Hence we can see read books play a major role in languages skills.
Other people would disgree.It may be true that they enjoy watch TV and learn knowledge quickly throughout watches TV.People who listen the documentary,they usually have a goods standard of language skills.All people cannot be the same,by that i mean they have their own way to learn new skills.
In conclusion ,I believe that reading books are more likely to facilitate our skills both left brain and right brain .nonetheless it depend on peoples' learning conditions

提问时间：2021-01-02

答案

感觉还要努力.里面拼写,单复数,第三人称,复杂句句式错误不少.句子间的连接词要注意.并且需要总结一些高级词汇.比如获得knowledge 用 acquire更好些