题目

谁能帮我修改一下这篇英语report啊
Hello,Everyone,I'm Sissi.Today I will report about the plan of our life.Everyone,think about what will you be after 20 years.In my opinion,beauty is very important for every girl.Right?Like me,I want to live in a beautiful city with a beautiful life.(next) this is the written graph of my life.At first,it is not very high but I want to make it higher and higher.When we are at the low point,don't give up.It will become good qucikly.Even though we are at the high point,we don't need to be arrogant or else we will fell down easily.(next) There are some things that I think it's valuable.There are the values which I rank,I think intelligence and skill must be the No.1.I also think that confidence,optimism,love,dream,and beginning are valuable.First,I have to be confidence that I can make the best of myself.Second,I must have an optimistic behavior so I won't give up my goal.Third,We must love all the living things in the world.Fourth,dream is my life's target.Fifth,everything is hard at the beginning.But a good beginning makes a good ending.If I connect the five words,this would be my COLDB way.After 20 years,I want to be someone who show the knowledge I know and the abilities I learned in my workplace.I want to be full of confidence and passion,and I wish I can live happily.So from now on.I have think my lifestyle,have many hobbies and be optimistic.These are all my report.Thank you.
希望能帮我把语法错误改正一下.

提问时间：2020-12-05

答案

直接说report就可以了,把about去掉.think about what you will be after 20years.这里后面的句子是宾语从句,语序正常.is very important to girl.quickly 写错了be confident .confidence 是名词.I have think 显然...