题目

求帮忙改英语短文
Tom is a little boy,and he is only seven years old.Once he goes to a cinema.It is the first time for him to do that.He buys a ticket and goes in.But after two or three minutes he comes out,and buys the second ticket and goes in again.After a few minutes he comes out again and buys the third ticket.Two or three minutes after that he comes out and asks for another ticket.But a girl asks him,“Why do you buy so many tickets?How many friends do you meet?” “No,I have no friends here,but a big woman always stops me at the door and cuts up my ticket.”
这篇文章都用过去式后中间几句有些重复,

提问时间：2020-10-21

答案

修改建议　　1、第一句 Tom is a little boy,and he is only seven years old 用来介绍Tom 的个人情况,可以用现在时态.如果把整个段落都看做是一个故事,这一句也可以用过去时叙述.　　2、后面讲的是他过去的经历,需...