题目

谁来帮我检查一下我英语的值日生报告?
Hello,class!I`m XXX.I`m very happy because Shenzhou 7 came back successful a few weeks ago.I want to go to the universe to see the moon.But the dream can`t come ture.
I have read Narnia recently.There are seven books like Harry.Po-
tter.But lots of people think J.K.Rowling copied Narnia.Becau-
se the books older than J.K.Rowling.However,I still love them.
That`s all.thanks!
主要是看看有没有什么语法.时态等的错误,

提问时间：2020-10-13

答案

Hello,class!I`m XXX.I`m very happy because Shenzhou 7 came back successfully a few weeks ago.I want to go to the universe to see the moon.But the dream can`t come ture.
I have read Narnia recently.There are seven books like Harry.Po-
tter.But lots of people think J.K.Rowling copied Narnia.Becau-
se the books are older than J.K.Rowling.However,I still love them.
That`s all.thanks!
只有两处错误:success in line 1 and are in line 5