题目

英语造句,帮帮看,修改下
1.positive:The positive attitude can change everything.
2.protest :I protest that everyone should make your plan.
3.reflect on :His gumption reflected on me.
4.wheel :He was hurt ,so he need to wheel.
5.emergency room ; Looking the emergency room,my mood is sad.
6.scare ; Something in their eyes scared me.
7.allergic ; He is allergic to flowers.
8.bullet ; I want this world,no war no bullets.

提问时间：2020-09-05

答案

1.positive: The positive attitude can change everything.//完全ok
2.protest : I protest that everyone should make your plan.//protest用作动词的时候反对抗议,语气比较重.工人抗议政府做出的降低最低工资标准.这种用protest比较合适.当然别人指责你虚伪,你站出来反对的时候也可以用protest...但是语气也是比较强烈的.你造的句子感觉就是不同意每个人都应该制定计划,不同意跟强烈反对的语气还是很不同的.另外还有everyone,后面your plan不是很一致,如果是口语中完全ok..但是标准书面语中不行.
3.reflect on : His gumption reflected on me.//reflect on 有两个意思：1.回忆,仔细想；2.造成影响,可是是负面的影响,甚至让人丢脸的.
4.wheel : He was hurt ,so he need to wheel.//首先；时态.need用相应的形式.另外这个句子看起来我总觉得有点怪.但是不知道除了need到底怎么改.顺便提一下,wheel可以做动词.
5.emergency room ; Looking the emergency room,my mood is sad.//我心情很悲伤,I am sad就可以了.还有如果是你的句子,主语是my mood...你要哪个了looking...做整个句子的状语,可是look这个动作不是主语my mood发出的,所以这是不正确的,把主语改成I之后就ok了.还有,look 看,这时候是不及物动词,应该用look at...还有,看着急诊室外面的灯比较合理
6.scare ; Something in their eyes scared me./可以
7.allergic ; He is allergic to flowers.//基本ok,如果要精益求精的话,对花其实不会过敏,过敏原是花粉.
8.bullet ; I want this world,no war no bullets//这个读过去感觉非常中式英文.还不如翻简单一点的,The bullet ran through him.子弹穿过了他（的身体）.