题目

有人帮改演讲稿,明天就要用
Good morning teachers and friends!It's my honor to speak here.And I am very glad to share my topic with you.Today I'd like something about I look forward to the singer.
Why I yearn for the singer?Because I love singing.I think it is happy and relaxed.In our mood not happy,we can sing loudly,let the mood.When there is a happy thing,we sing loudly,to express our happiness.The song is beautiful,with wonderful music singing,is happy.If a beautiful song you sing,that this is how good!When your song to be recognized,that is how happy!
The singer is my dream,in order to let the dream come true,I will Study hard,in the spare time to learn more about singing and music.Only to the dream will come true.
Ok,thank for your listening that's all.
看看有没有语法错误什么的

提问时间：2020-06-25

答案

嗯,很遗憾,有错误,而且还不少.先说语法错误 ：你是想当歌手,所以 第一段最后一句 look forward to be a singer.要加个be,同时用不定冠词.I‘d lile 后边少了动词,to explain why I am looking forward to be a singe...