题目

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很多人都止步于成功前的一步，他们往往在这条路上走了一段，当看不到成功的彼岸时，就选择放弃这条路，寻找其他的出路。殊不知，成功就在他们选择放弃的一步之遥。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英语写一篇短文。

内容要求：
1．描述漫画内容；
2．分析漫画所要表达的人生哲理；
3．谈谈该漫画给你的启示。
注意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词
2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3．词数1 20左右；
4．文中不能出现考生的具信息。
Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up．
In  this  pictur，we can
see                                      
                                                      
                                                                              

答案

Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up.
In this picture, we can see a man is cutting earth in a tunnel, hoping to find some diamonds. He makes great efforts in his work. However, after a long time of pains without gains, he decides to give up. With one or two more attempts of cutting, he would have seen those diamonds right in front of him.
This story tells us a very simple but important piece of truth: we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our efforts until we succeed.
As a student preparing for the entrance examinations, I should learn a lesson from the man. Just like the diamonds in the picture, success is just waiting for my last efforts. I have been cutting earth for so many years, so I will never give up before I succeed.

解析

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，要求根据下面提示，写一篇短文。写作时要抓住图画的内容也要从图画的表面看到它深层的含义，可以结合所给的提示进行论述，也可以适当添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】这篇范文准确的诠释了漫画的内容，也对这种现象进行阐述，遣词造句方面也很注意，如词组：give up 放弃，be confident in 对…自信，还有一些句型：we can see a man is cutting earth in a tunnel, hoping to find some diamonds. He makes great efforts in his work. 这句话用了现在分词做状语， With one or two more attempts of cutting, he would have seen those diamonds right in front of him.这句话用了虚拟语气， we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our efforts until we succeed. 这句话用了宾语从句， As a student preparing for the entrance examinations, I should learn a lesson from the man. 这句话用了现在分词做定语。