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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Once upon a time in a land far far away, there was a wonderful old man who loved everything. Animals, spiders, insects...
One day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon(茧) of a butterfly. He took it home.
A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no farther.
Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly then came out easily.
But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled (萎缩的) wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly.
What the man in his kindness and haste did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Nature"s way of forcing fluid from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.
Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any obstacles, it would cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30词概括短文内容要点; 
2. 以约120词就 “个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”这一话题发表你的看法,并包含以下要
点:
(1) 你读了这个故事后的感受;
(2) 叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果;
(3) 假如你是父母一方,你会如何磨砺自己的孩子?
[写作要求]
1.可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引
用原文中句子; 
2. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
答案
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A kind man cut a cocoon open in order to lessen the pain of a butterfly when he saw it struggling out of the cocoon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help. (37 words)
The story sets me thinking. Our life is more or less like this. Sometimes, struggles or obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles or obstacles that increase our willpower and contribute to our success. Without these trials, we could never achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in the story. 
Nowadays, with only one child in most families, parents do whatever they can to satisfy the child’s needs and even do for him what should be done by himself. Consequently, the child is unable to look after himself without his parents’ presence. Too much care from parents deprives children of chances to grow strong by conquering obstacles. Just as a saying goes, “Flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm”.
If I were a parent, I would first keep him well informed that life is never easy and that he should be ready to face any difficulties. Besides, I would expose him to the hardships in life instead of protecting him from difficulties, providing them with chances to fight for his bright future by conquering challenges.
解析

试题分析:任务型读写是主要考查考生必须熟悉所读材料的整体结构与主旨大意,利用略读和检索阅读的方式寻求需求的信息,对文中信息进行有效筛选、整合和综合概括的能力。要求考生在阅读理解的基础上,对阅读信息进行二次理解、加工,归纳要点、整合零散信息,把加工后的信息准确有序的通过短文表达出来。
点评:首先,看清答题要求,尤其是“写作要求”后的具体要求,并在答题中一直自始至终贯彻其要求。应避免句式过于单一呆板,应该有长有短、错落有致;有抑有扬,使文章有很强的节奏感,这就要求懂得灵活运用富于变化的各种句式。例如强调句、倒装句、with复合结构、非谓语动词、恰到好处的被动句、高级的定语从句、what引导的主语从句等。
核心考点
试题【阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Once upon a time in a land far far away, there was 】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
书面表达(10分)如今手机在中学生当中使用越来越普遍,同学就“校园内是否可以使用手机”进行讨论同学们对此各抒己见. 请你给编辑写一封信,反映讨论情况并谈谈你自己的观点。
赞同
不赞同
你的观点
1. 方便联系
1.学校有公用电话

2. 突发事故,可求助
2.玩游戏 ,影响学习
3. 课余可放松自己
3. 浪费时间,金钱
 
注意:1. 开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;2可适当增加细节和连接词,使文章通顺连贯3.词数:100左右
Dear Editor,
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
题型:不详难度:| 查看答案
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。 内容主要包括:
1.教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等
2.教授对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础)
3.工作量:
--每周12节课,任选三门课   
--担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)
【写作要求】
只能用5个句子表达全部内容,开头已写好。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. ______________________________
Best wishes!
Li Hua
题型:不详难度:| 查看答案
读写任务阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
Since I started high school,there have been many misunderstandings between my parents and me.They think I am in puppy love(早恋).
They secretly check my text messages and listen in on my phone conversations.They also talk with my class teacher and keep telling me how bad puppy love is.What my parents have done drives me so crazy that I have had several violent quarrels with them.I know they are trying to protect me from being hurt,but I just feel they are ignoring my need for privacy and independence.
I don"t want this to go on,so I have decided to take some action.I on purpose leave my text
message and diaries about for them to read.I stay in their sight while I am talking on the phone and avoid joking with boys.I spend more time at home studying than hanging out and trying my best to improve my school performance.
Gradually,my parents have started to calm down.They hardly ever check my messages any more and allow me to talk with male classmate.I"m happy that they are beginning to trust me.
In our life,misunderstandings happen at times and bother us.But if we can put our feet into other"s shoes and take positive action,a misunderstanding can be a chance to achieve better understanding.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;
2.以约120个词讲述一次你或你的朋友被误会的经历,内容包括:
(1)时间、地点和起因;
(2)被别人误会给你或你的朋友带来的影响;
(3)你或你朋友是如何消除别人的误会。
【写作要求】
作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参考阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;    
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
题型:不详难度:| 查看答案
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
I was brought up in the countryside by my grandmother. She was a very courageous and inspiring woman and was very beautiful, too. In comparison with her or some of my classmates, I always felt that I was not beautiful or pretty. In fact, when I was studying in middle school, I thought I was not as good as other students and just because of these negative feelings, I was not very confident. One day, I went to the shoe shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got there, I noticed a foreign lady talking to a salesgirl. But the salesgirl didn’t understand what the foreigner was saying. They both looked worried. I went up to help them. The lady is an Australian. She wanted to buy a pair of travelling shoes. So I told it to the salesgirl. The lady was very glad when she took them. She spoke high praise for my spoken English and said that I was a pretty girl. Both of them expressed their thanks to me.
As a matter of fact, no one had ever praised me like that before. It was so encouraging. Suddenly I felt confident and happy. It is true that those words turned my life around.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点。
2.然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文,描写表扬或称赞给人带来的愉快和鼓舞,并包括以下要点:
a)叙述你或你的朋友被老师或其他人表扬的一次真实或虚构的经历;
b)被表扬后的感觉是怎么样的;
c)这次称赞、表扬带来的影响。
【写作要求】
1. 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构,组织故事,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 作文题目已在答题卷中给出。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
题型:不详难度:| 查看答案
假如你叫李鸣,是长春外国语学校的学生,你的朋友李刚写信告诉你他学习英语有困难,尤其是听力能力较差,写作能力也不够。请你根据下列要点写封回信,给他提一些建议。
要点:提高听力能力的建议:每天听英语,别贪多,选择磁带(tape)由易到难。
提高写作能力的建议:多读,好文章须反复读;记日记(keep a diary)。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.注意书信的格式;
3.短文必须包括以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Gang,
_______________________________________________________________________________
___
Best wishes!
题型:不详难度:| 查看答案
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