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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
I was brought up in the countryside by my grandmother. She was a very courageous and inspiring woman and was very beautiful, too. In comparison with her or some of my classmates, I always felt that I was not beautiful or pretty. In fact, when I was studying in middle school, I thought I was not as good as other students and just because of these negative feelings, I was not very confident. One day, I went to the shoe shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got there, I noticed a foreign lady talking to a salesgirl. But the salesgirl didn’t understand what the foreigner was saying. They both looked worried. I went up to help them. The lady is an Australian. She wanted to buy a pair of travelling shoes. So I told it to the salesgirl. The lady was very glad when she took them. She spoke high praise for my spoken English and said that I was a pretty girl. Both of them expressed their thanks to me.
As a matter of fact, no one had ever praised me like that before. It was so encouraging. Suddenly I felt confident and happy. It is true that those words turned my life around.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点。
2.然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文,描写表扬或称赞给人带来的愉快和鼓舞,并包括以下要点:
a)叙述你或你的朋友被老师或其他人表扬的一次真实或虚构的经历;
b)被表扬后的感觉是怎么样的;
c)这次称赞、表扬带来的影响。
【写作要求】
1. 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构,组织故事,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 作文题目已在答题卷中给出。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
答案

Praise can change a person
The writer was praised for his fluent spoken English when she helped an Austrian and the salesgirl as a translator in the shoe shop. This praise not only made her happy but also changed her attitude towards herself.
Praise is really magical. Perhaps many of us had such experience. Take myself as an example. I was very naughty in the primary school. Most of the teachers and even my parents felt headache of me. But it happened that I once got a very high mark in an examination and the head teacher told my parents about this. My parents praised me highly for this for quiet a long time and told neighbors about that. I felt really happy and greatly encouraged. Every time when I heard others talk to me about my excellent examination result, I thought to myself that I would work even harder and made greater progress.
Praise is very important and inspiring. Just as Shakespeare said, “our praise is our wages."
解析

试题分析:考查议论文的写作。本文的论点是表扬对人的影响,表扬可以改变一个人的一生,可以从自己亲身经历的事情或者身边的人所经历的事情来作为模板进行叙述,要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象,进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
点评:本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
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试题【阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。I was brought up in the countryside by my grandmoth】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
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注意:1.词数100左右;
2.注意书信的格式;
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Dear Li Gang,
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2. 可以适当增减细节。
3. 词数100字左右。
4. 通知格式已写好。
5. 参考词语:
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