题目

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假设你是阳光中学的学生李军，你和在北京上学的英国朋友Jack约好下周末去上海旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1.表示歉意； 2. 解释原因；3. 另约时间。
                                                                                             
                                                                                
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                               
                                                                                  

答案

Dear Jack,
I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Shanghai with you next week, which I have promised. I feel sorry about it and want you to know what has happened.
Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong, who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he will return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know, we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.  I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Shanghai. Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jun

解析

试题分析：本题是书信类作文，要求写一封电子邮件，因为不能赴约向杰克表示歉意；解释原因；还有另约时间。材料已给出，写作的时候关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。还要有适当的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
【亮点说明】I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Shanghai with you next week, which I have promised.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， I feel sorry about it and want you to know what has happened.这句话用了宾语从句， Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he will return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. 这句话用了定语从句和宾语从句， I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Shanghai. 这句话用了动名词的复合结构。Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.这句话用了过去分词做定语。