题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

高中生活是人的一生中很美好的时光，除了学业之外，我们还经历、感悟了许多。为了不留遗憾，在临近毕业时，你将做些什么呢？请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
·要抓紧时间温书迎考；
·要主动与对你有误解的同学沟通；           
·要向老师父母感恩；
·其他你认为值得做的事情。
注意：
1．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；
2．短文词数：100词左右
3. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数
We all value the time we spent in high school. Besides studies, there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation.

答案

We all value the time we spent in high school. Besides studies, there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation.
Not wanting to leave any regret, I’ll make the best of my time to go over the lessons and make adequate preparations for the College Entrance Exam. Meanwhile, I think if of necessity have a heart-to-heart talk with whoever might have misunderstood me and smooth away the misunderstanding, for I do treasure our friendship. Above all, I’d like to express my gratitude to my teachers with those help I have made continuous progress in the past three years and my parents who have taken so good care of me. Finally, L would like to take some photos of my teachers, classmates and school, which will serve as reminders of my precious high school days.

解析

试题分析：考查说明文中的材料类文章的写作。要求写短文，要点要求都已经给出，短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
【亮点说明】文章写的比较简洁，连接词复合句的使用较为准确到位：Not wanting to leave any regret, I’ll make the best of my time to go over the lessons and make adequate preparations for the College Entrance Exam这句话放在开头就用了分词作状语结构；I think if of necessity have a heart-to-heart talk with whoever might have misunderstood me and smooth away the misunderstanding, for I do treasure our friendship.这句话用了介宾结构以及for引导的原因状语 ；I would like to take some photos of my teachers, classmates and school, which will serve as reminders of my precious high school days.这句话中的非限制性定语从句的使用恰到好处；此外，连接词meanwhile, above all等也使得文章更加连贯。