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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
More than five years I was working at a little clinic after I graduated from college. Actually I didn’t like the job and felt depressed every day. One day while working at the cash register, an elderly couple came in with a little girl in a wheelchair.
As I looked closer at this girl, I realized that she was disabled. I then realized she had no arms or legs, just a head, neck and torso. She was in red. That is a warm color.
As I took the money from her grandparent, I looked down at the girl, who was giving me the cutest, largest smile I have ever seen. All of a sudden her handicap was gone and all I saw was this beautiful girl, and her smile, just like the warm sun in the winter melted me and almost instantly gave me a completely new sense of what life is all about.
It was her smile that took me from a poor, unhappy college student and brought me into her world; a world of smiles, love and warmth.
Now I’m a successful business person and whenever I get down and think about the troubles of the world, I think about that little girl and the remarkable lesson about life that she taught me.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点。
然后以约120词就“生活态度”这一话题发表你的看法,内容包括:
上述故事给你的感受与启发;
举例说明你生活中遇到过让你改变生活态度的人或事;
你认为生活态度对我们的生活有何重要意义。
【写作要求】
1.可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
答案

The writer encountered a little disabled girl when he was working as a cashier in a clinic. The girl’s smile taught the writer a profound lesson, and inspired him to become successful.
After reading the story, I was deeply touched too. I’m in favor of the idea that when you smile to the world, the world will smile back to you. The story reminds me of my friend Joe, who used to complain a lot when he came across any kind of difficulty or whenever something unpleasant happened to him. Later, Joe’s classmate sitting next to him in Senior Grade One helped him to change greatly. The classmate was born in a very poor family, but instead of complaining, he always smiled to everybody around and devoted himself to his studies. Ever since he met his deskmate, more and more smiles appeared on Joe’s face and soon he even made greater progress in his studies.
In a word, attitude is everything. Only when we take a correct attitude toward life can we enjoy a better, more meaningful and more beautiful life.
解析

试题分析:本文属于读写任务写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容。认真看清题目要求,这篇书面表达给了一段材料:先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容,要求有很高的概括提炼的能力,要抓住文章的主题,再以约120个词写一篇短文,按照要点去表达,不能有遗漏,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯,使用了词组:work as担当, in favor of 支持,赞同,instead of 代替,devoted himself to 致力于,In a word总之,和句型:The story reminds me of my friend Joe, who used to complain a lot when he came across any kind of difficulty or whenever something unpleasant happened to him. 这句话用了定语从句和让步状语从句,Later, Joe’s classmate sitting next to him in Senior Grade One helped him to change greatly.这句话用了现在分词做定语,Only when we take a correct attitude toward life can we enjoy a better, more meaningful and more beautiful life.这句话用了倒装句。
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试题【阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。More than five years I was working at a little clin】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
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假如你是一名失学儿童,名叫李华,你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr. Brown的资助,可以重返校园。你给Mr. Brown写了一封信,内容如下:
  ★ 收到钱和书后能重返校园,非常感激;
  ★ 在老师的帮助下,学习有了很大的进步,受到老师的表扬和鼓励;
  ★ 决心更加努力学习,取得更大的进步;
  ★ 盼望见到Mr. Brown,希望他寄来一张照片。
注意:1. 书信应包括以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2. 词数:100左右
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假设你是学生会主席李明,为了增进学生之间交流,学生会决定在网络上建立中外学生英文交流论坛,请你根据下列要点提示介绍此论坛,并号召大家参与论坛。
注意:1. 词数100左右.
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3. 开头已给出,但不计入总词数.
目的
 提供交流平台
 
内容
要点
细节
加强交流
 结识朋友……
提供帮助
学习,生活……
献计献策
学校发展,校园生活……
Students’ Union has decided to set up our own BBS. ________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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假设你叫李华,现在英国工作,你的朋友王平写信告诉你他打算赴英留学,想知道初到英国可能会遇到的困难。请你用英语给他写一封回信,信的内容应包括:
1. 可能会遇到的困难:语言方面的障碍、饮食的不习惯、想家、孤独等;
2. 鼓励他并表示愿意帮助他。
注意:1. 词数:100字左右。   
2. 信的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Ping,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here
in the UK. ____________________________________________________________________________
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
Yours,
Li Hua
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你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇有关学生心理问题的短文。
【写作内容】
请根据以下信息,写一篇英语短文。
心理问题
1. 抑郁焦虑,感到紧张害怕,遇到困难就灰心。
2. 学习压力大,怕老师提问,怕考试。
3. 孤独的封闭心理,不愿和同学朋友交流。
解决方法
1. 积极参加班级和学校组织的各项活动。
2. 树立学习目标。
*参考词汇:心理问题 psychological problems;精神抑郁 feel low or depressed
【写作要求】
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The suitable clothes can make men handsome and make women attractive, so more and more people spend much money on clothes.
Thanks to the fashion designers, many different styles of clothes appear every day. If you go to a big store or walk on the street, you"ll find many fashionable clothes easily.
Of course everyone has his or her own way of dressing. Perhaps the most popular clothes are casual ones. They"re made of cotton and there are many types of designs. They feel comfortable, so men and women as well as the young and the old enjoy wearing them. Some casual clothes don"t need dry-cleaning, so they can save us money.
Not everyone can wear casual clothes at any time and any place. Some people have to wear uniforms when they"re at work such as police officers, soldiers, firefighters and pilots. Uniforms can not only protect them but also show good discipline.
It doesn"t matter what kinds of clothes you wear. It"s important for everyone to dress neatly and suitable (合适地).
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点。
2.以约120个词就我们现实生活中衣着的话题谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1)你个人对待衣着重要性的理解;
(2)举例说明你对衣服潮流(fashion)的看法;
(3)你怎样看待身边部分同学对名牌服装的追求。
【写作要求】
1.可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
题型:不详难度:| 查看答案
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