题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
A passenger told an air hostess that he needed a cup of water to take his medicine when the plane just took off.She told him that she would bring him the water within ten minutes.
Thirty minutes passed.But the air hostess was so busy in the aircraft cabin(客舱) that she forgot to bring him the water! As a result,the passenger couldn’t take his medicine.When the air hostess hurried to him with a cup of water, he was angry and refused her offer.
In the following hours on the flight,each time the air hostess passed by the passenger she would ask him with a smile whether he needed help or not.But the passenger never paid attention to her.
When the passenger was going to get off the plane,he said to the air hostess with a smile,“On the flight,you offer service to me for twelve times in a11.Although l didn’t accept them, how can I refuse your twelve sincere(真诚的)smiles?”
[写作内容]
1.概括短文的内容要点,该部分的词数大约30左右;
2.以“真诚的回报”为主题发表自己的看法,至少包含以下的内容要点,该部分的词数大约
120左右:
(1)如果你是那位旅客,你是否也会被这位空姐的做法感动?为什么?
(2)你是否也有遇到过类似的情况,描述一下当时的情形;
(3)你觉得真诚能够使我们得到回报吗?
[写作要求]
你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
答案
One possible version:
A passenger on a flight become very angry because the air hostess forgot to bring him a cup of water .But finally he was moved by her sincere smiles and service .
Although the air hostess made a mistake because of her busy work , she tried to make up and offered the service sincerely .Therefore , if I were the passenger , I would be moved by the air hostess as well .
I used to meet a waiter like the air hostess .Because of his carelessness , he spilled the soup on a customer .Of course the customer became angry .The waiter realized his fault , apologized to the customer sincerely and finally got the customer’s pardon .
As to me , I believe that we can get pardon or even repay if we treat others sincerely .When others feel that we are sincere enough , they are more willing to forgive or help us .
解析
试题分析:在写概要部分,除了明确文章主题外,还应抓住六个要素:when, where, who, what, why, how。在这六个要素中,所占内容比重最大的是what,但是不要写的过于详细。一般来说,记叙文的故事概要可以用这样的模板来表示:Who did what by…because… 分析本段材料可知这段文章的要素是Where—on the plane; who- a passenger , an air hostess; what –a cup of water ; why –forget ; result – forgive,然后列出要点之后,再用自己的话将要点组织起来。在陈述观点或发表看法时往往开门见山地提出观点和立场,常用的句型有Personally, I think that …;Frankly speaking, I think that…From my point of view …;In my opinion, I’d say that…等。
【亮点说明】本文在结构上符合读写任务的布局要求,首先概述了发生的事情,然后发表自己对这件事的看法,再描述了自己的一次经历,最后阐明主题。在发表自己观点时用了一个让步状语从句Although the air hostess made a mistake because of her busy work和一个条件状语从句if I were the passenger来表明自己的态度,这种复合句的使用不仅显示了较强的逻辑性,也显示了作者对句型句式的准确把握。在描述自己经历以及提出建议时所使用的简单句使文章长短句结合,句式更富于变化,更为灵动。
核心考点
试题【阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文A passenger told an air hostess that he needed a cup】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
注意:
1、词数不少于120个;
2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice; and he spent most of his days complaining about it.
"It is true that you cannot sing;" said the fox, "but look how beautiful you are!"
"0b,but what good is all this beauty;" cried the bird, "with such an unpleasant voice!"
"Listen," said the fox, "each one owns something good: You have such beauty; the nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can"t you just be happy about what you have already got?"
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括短文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词就“停止抱怨并珍惜自己所拥有的“这一主题发表你的看法,内容包括:
(l)你或你身边的人的类似事例;
(2)谈谈你对该主题的看法。
【写作要求】
1.作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得
直接引用原文中的句子:
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
Optimism always leads to happiness, health and success while pessimism, by contrast, results in hopelessness, sickness and failure. That’s because optimists and pessimists deal with the same challenge and disappointment in very different ways.
注意: 1.不得照抄英语提示语; 2.内容必须结合生活中的一个事例;
3. 词数为100-120左右。
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1. 教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日英国(Britain Today)、今日美国(America Today)等。
2. 授课对象:高中生(至少有两年英语基础)。
3. 工作量:每周12学时,任选两门课; 担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor to…)。
注意:1. 字数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
正方 | 反方 |
1.钱非常重要,生活离不开钱; 2.钱可以帮助我们解决很多问题 3.钱使我们的生活更舒适。 | 1.金钱不是万能的; 2.金钱买不到幸福和健康; 3.过分在乎金钱就会失去人生的意义 |
注意:1.词数 100 左右
2.开头已给出,但不计入总词数;
3.不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥,以行文连贯。
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