题目
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We often hear people say, “Life is hard!” Faced with difficulties and even failures in life, people’s attitudes are different. Some feel optimistic(乐观的) while others do not. Do be optimistic in your school life.
注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;②除诗歌外,文体不限;③文中不得透露个人姓名和名称;④词数不少于120。
答案
Life has taught me a lot, among which is that we should take an optimistic attitude towards life. When one is optimistic, he often foresees the hopes and actively tries to work out the problem.
There was a time when I was always No. One in the examination praised by teachers and admired by schoolmates. However, things changed when I entered this key school. I found I had great difficulty with my study and was left behind by many students. I got frustrated and felt pessimistic about my future. Luckily, it was at this very moment that my head teacher found this and encouraged me. With his timely help, I made steady progress. To me, life shows its sunshine and smiles again.
Just as a proverb says, “Life is a mirror. If you smile to life, life often smiles to you.” Having the optimistic attitude is the key in life.
解析
试题分析:考查半开放性作文写作。半开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象,进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,应用了一些较好的词组和句子:work out 计算出,had great difficulty with 有困难,left behind 落后,With his timely help在他及时的帮助下, Life has taught me a lot, among which is that we should take an optimistic attitude towards life. 这句话用了定语从句, There was a time when I was always No. One in the examination praised by teachers and admired by schoolmates.这句话用了定语从句, it was at this very moment that my head teacher found this and encouraged me. 这句话用了强调句, Just as a proverb says, “Life is a mirror. If you smile to life, life often smiles to you.” 最后还使用了谚语。
核心考点
试题【请你根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。 We often hear people say, “Life is hard!” Faced with di】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
我们周围不擅长交流的人挺多的,劝他不必为此事苦恼;
告诉他与别人有效地交流是很重要的。与他人搞好关系,可以有助于我们的学习,还能增加成功的机会;
就如何改变目前的情况给他提出至少两点建议。
注意:1. 字数:100字左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头结尾已给出,不计入总字数。
Dear Wang Nan,
I know you are feeling annoyed these days because____________________________
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All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 火车晚点15分钟,与接你的Tom 错过。
2. 在火车上认识的定居美国的华人夫妇Taylor 把你带到Tom家,Tom不在;
3. 目前在Taylor 夫妇家;
4. 务必今晚打电话给你;电话号码是64611128.
注意
1. 词数100左右;
2. 不要逐字翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m in New York!
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Yours,
Li Hua
As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land.
The volume of passenger traffic(客运量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(铁道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers.
One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pressure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation.
[写作内容]
以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写,内容包括:
自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况;
“网上售票”引起人们不满的原因;
给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。
[写作要求]
作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语句连贯。
学生 | 观点 |
赞同者 | 1.方便、快捷、舒适的交通工具; 2.反映出国民生活条件提高,国家富强; 3.带动其他行业发展。 |
反对者 | 1.废气污染严重; 2.汽车过多影响交通,导致更多事故; 3.停车问题日益突出。 |
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
1. 大部分时间用来做功课;
2. 周日下午和朋友去体育场打篮球;
3. 有时和父母一起去看望爷爷奶奶;
4. 其他活动。
注意:1. 词数120-150;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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