题目

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假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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Thank you!

答案

Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
Thank you!

解析

【题型分析】
今年江西高考英语书面表达属于演讲稿写作。给予提纲，半自由半开放类。与学生实际生活十分贴切。让学生有话可说，但要得高分必须有深度的思想以及就话题语言灵活运用能力。即要能在清晰的框架内在语言和内容方面写出自己的特色。
【审题要素】
写作时需注意下列几点。
1. 应该使用第一人称。全文以现在以及将来范畴的时态为主，当然不排斥用过去时态。
2. 按提纲提示清晰分段，不能缺少要点（学会学习：方法，习惯等；学会做人：真诚；友善；学会其他）。
3.注意语言逻辑性和思维想象力。多用些语际衔接性词语（first of all ，besides ，on the one hand 等）。
【思路导引】
首先， 思考出要学会学习，要有个符合自己的方法，要养成良好的学习习惯，要有个正确的学习态度等；思考出要学会做人，要与人和善，要和睦相处，要正气真诚等；当然还要学会锻炼，学会娱乐，学会自我管理等。
然后，根据要点思考可用哪些表达法：the best way of .../ an acceptable thing is .../get into a habit of .../be active in..../go over.../behave well/it is kind of .../be involved in...等；根据提纲，连成句子，清晰分段。可用firstly.../in addition.../last but not the least等。
最后，虽然试卷给出了演讲开头，但我们别忘了在演讲稿结尾时，或总结，或展望未来，或表决心等。
【亮点说明】

重点 词汇 语句	Challenging，used to             In addition build up                        Develop a good habit get actively involved in            No pains no gains. get along well with ...
高级 句型	1. Developing a good habit is also of importance. （动名词短语作主语） 2. ...review what had been taught after class. （名词性从句） 3. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. （强调句） 4. I am sure that with great efforts, you will... （名词性从句） ...
段落 框架	First,... In addition,... Finally,...