题目

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根据提示，写一篇100字左右的短文介绍张华的变化。
提示：张华，阳光中学八年级学生。家庭富裕。过去零花钱常常花在买零食和打电脑游戏上。去年夏天，他去了一个贫困的村子，看见许多穷得上不起学的孩子。
那次经历影响了他许多。现在，他努力学习，将零花钱大部分捐给UNICEF,并积极参加许多慈善活动，帮助需要帮助的人。他觉得………

答案

Zhang Hua is a Grade 9 student of Sunshine Secondary School. His family is rich. He used to spend most of his pocket money buying snacks and playing computer games. He didn’t work so hard at school.
Last summer, he went to a poor village. There he saw many poor children. They couldn’t afford to go to school.
That experience affected Zhang Hua a lot. Now Zhang Hua works very hard at school and he donates most of his pocket money to UNICEF and he takes an active part in many charity activities to help people in need. He thinks it important to help people in need.

解析

这是一篇给材料作文，本文给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，根据要求可知时态中一般过去时态较多，人称是第三人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。