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中国梦是目前较热的话题，你们班级对梦想这个话题也进行了一次讨论。请你以“My dream”为题，写一篇短文。要点如下：
1、人人都有梦想，梦想可大可小。其实，大梦想就是由许多小的梦想构成的。
2、作为中学生，我们有各种各样的梦想。这些梦想就是我们的中国梦。
3、我们应该努力实现梦想，遇到困难时也不放弃梦想。
4、我的梦想是…… 
注意：1）文章必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
2）第4要点需用2到3句话做适当发挥。
3）词数80左右。(给出的内容不计入总词数)
My dream
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答案

My dream
Everyone has his dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams. As middle school students, we have all kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. We should try our best to make our dreams come true. When we meet any difficulty, we won’t give up our dreams.（I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream.）

解析

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写作者的梦想是什么，全文以一般现在时态为主。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如In fact ,is made up of，all kinds of， try our best to，come true，give up， dream of， From now on等短语，状语从句When we meet any difficulty；并列句The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。