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It is very common to see a large number of people doing exercise with their dogs when walking in a park in a nice weather.A pet is important to its owner at times.They are like one of the family members.I believe pets can be of great benefits to their owners than the problems they may lead.
First and foremost,it is believed that keeping pets help to cultivate patience for their owners.To raise a pet involve lots of work,such as mop the floor,vacuum the carpet and clean up pet’s home.Sometimes,pets can be more annoying than children as they can make a room messy and break cups and bowls.All of those hard works may keep some of us away from having a pet at home.Generally speaking,those people who have a pet in their home are more likely to be patient and responsible for what the pets have done.
Another advantage of owning a pet is that it can be a royal companion to its owner.Pets,like dogs and cats,may sit by your side when you are upset.We might talk to the pet

提问时间：2021-12-25

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