题目

大家看看我写的上海中考英语作文能得几分?
I'm a member of Animal Lovers
There is no doubt that a lot of animals will disappear soon if we go on hunting.I'm a member of Animal Lovers.my job is to prevent people from hunting animals and protect the eco-system.As a member of Animal Lovers,I feel extremely proud.I hope more people will join this club and more people will know the importance of animals.Care for animals,and the earth will be more beautiful.I'm glad to be a member of Animal Lovers.
按照上海市中考英语作文评分标准 18分能得几分?

提问时间：2021-04-15

答案

有高级句式的应用,但同样也有幼稚的语言（比如I hope more people will join this club and more people will know the importance of animals可以用下省略句,改为I hope more people will join this club and know the importance of animals这样不啰嗦）但总体可以,满分18的话若判卷不很严格14,15分吧