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Would you ever believe that billion dollars in medical investigation
could be saved every year for seniors only by playing video games instead of the
usage of exceptional expensive rehab machines?This may be absurd,but trust me;
these modern divertissement technologies are excellent mental and physical rehabilitation
tools for them.
In the first place,video games are the primarily most
important mental support for seniors.In fact,elders are more likely to feel
the loneliness every day so they may need a way to be distracted.Accordingly,
funny games and humorous images that come out from the screen will not just stop
them to realize they are alone but could also make them happier.In the same way,by playing video games,
seniors could have comparatively less chance to be affected by Alzheimer
disease.Essentially,because of the necessity of using head constantly,the neurotic
system will be aging more slowly.As res

提问时间：2021-04-09

答案

1.only by playing video games
only by 是只有通过,此处应去掉only
2.feel the loneliness ,不要the
As result,video games are even better than
medical machines.
作为结果,应该是as a rsult.
3.Second,divert with video games is the best way for seniors to
enhance physical rehabilitation and stay healthy.
此处应该是secondly.还有,你后面的divert with video games是做主语,那就应该是diverting with了.
4.On one hand,it helps developing muscles
help后面不是接动词原形吗?
5.Without a doubt,video games are good for seniors as it provides exceptional benefits such as mental and physical rehab tool.
毫无疑问应该是there is no doubt.你用without也应该是without any doubt啊,还有,你后面的句子,前面是video games are后面又是 it provides ,有点相互矛盾.那个地方是用as 还是for呢?我也不太记得了额