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高三英语作文批改
作文要求是描述事迹和你的看法.without hesitation she gave a hand regardless of potential danges.nevertheless,occupied in comforting the lady,she was knocked by a car,which caused a sharp pain and left fracture on her leg.after that she wasn't regretful,maintaining it was life that counted.personally,i think highly of her heroic acts.there' on denying that but for her help,the lady would have got into bigger trouble.it is horrible to imagine passengers leaving the injuered alone,having no sympathy.i think it of greet significance to help the lady immediately at the moment,which brings hope as well as love back to society.i firmly believe only when everyone attaches great importance to helping people in need can we get rid of coldness and live in harmony!

提问时间：2021-04-07

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without hesitation she gave a hand regardless of potential danges(dangers).nevertheless,occupied in comforting the lady,she was knocked by a car,which caused a sharp pain and left fracture on her leg.after that she wasn't regretful,maintaining it was life that counted.
personally,i think highly of her heroic acts.there' on (no) denying that but for her help,the lady would have got into bigger trouble.it is horrible to imagine passengers leaving the injuered ( injured) alone,(+and) having no sympathy.i think it of greet (great)significance to help the lady immediately at the moment,which brings hope as well as love back to society.i firmly believe only when everyone attaches great importance to helping people in need can we get rid of coldness and live in harmony!
很好的作文啊!