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To start with,I must admit that changes are always inevitable in life and provide challenges to life,which make one fulfilled and energetic throughout the tedious world.However,there are still a majority of individuals,including me,who prefer doing the same things and avoiding change.Here come the following reasons to support my view.
First,doing the same things requires proficiency,which comes from one’s talent and patience rather than repeatable techniques.We cannot accomplish a high quality task without skills gained during daily improved same manufacture.Second,concentrating on the same things does not mean avoiding progress,but much more things taken into consideration to enhance the work quality.As we know more detailed about the thing,more problems can be found,thus requires us come up with more relevant solutions.
On the contrary,changes,especially frequent changes,are not always good but make new environment for us to adapt to.Some may find i

提问时间：2021-04-05

答案

7分 please pay attention to your choice of words. Some of them are not specific enough. Another problem is the unity of address. Try to avoid using "i" or "we", which indicates personal ideas.