题目

有哪位好心人 帮我看看这篇作文 能的多少分啊 有哪里写的不好啊 谢谢乐
Some people think the main benefit of the international cooperation is the protection of the environment, however, others believe it is the world business. Discuss both sides and show your opinion.
As is known, there are an increasing number of the benefits of the international collaboration in our society. However, there has been a spirited controversy on which is the main benefit. Some people contend that the environmental protection is the prime profit from the international collaboration, while others argue that it is the worldwide business. As far as I concerned, both views are possible and reasonable, which should depend on the cooperative nations’ conditions.
It goes without saying that international cooperation can exert the more positive effects on protecting environment. For one thing, international collaboration can conserve as much energy as possible to keep a sustainable development of the environment, without resource deplet

提问时间：2021-04-05

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我看懂了应该可以得高分,不过内容在详细一点就好了特别是结束句.加油哦@.@