题目

I knew from tv in last winter that kids in some areas in.Tibet badly needed clothes or textbooks.l talked about it with my good friends.Although our birthdays were just around the corner,we decided to have a joint birthdays party.Instead of receive gifts,we asked our guest to make donations to the poor kids.They happy brought some clothes,dolls,and old textbooks.We packed our own donations as well as their,and delivered them to a primary school in.Tibet.l also phoned a school headmaster to confirm that the donations had received.The headmaster thanked us sincerely on the phone.We were pretty happy about that we did.

提问时间：2021-04-01

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I knew from TV (去掉in) last winter that kids in some areas in Tibet badly needed clothes (or改成and) textbooks.l talked about it with my good (friends改成friend).(Although改成Because) our birthdays were just around the corner,we decided to have a joint (birthdays改成birthday) party.Instead of (receive改成receiving) gifts,we asked our (guest改成guests) to make donations to the poor kids.They (happy改成happily) brought some clothes,dolls and old textbooks.We packed our own donations as well as (their改成theirs),and delivered them to a primary school in Tibet.l also phoned (a改成the) school headmaster to confirm that the donations had (加入been) received.The headmaster thanked us sincerely on the phone.We were pretty happy about (that改成what) we did.
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