题目

帮忙修改一下我写的英文自我介绍!
Good afternonn,every teacher !
It is really my honor to see you again.
I hope i can make a good performance today.
In fact,I have some nervous. So if I will make some mistakes in my talk,please excuse me.
Now i will introduce myself briefly .
I am 28 years old. I was born in a town of chongqing.
I was graduated from xi’an university of technology. my major is electronical and informational engineering.and i got my bachelor degree in the year of 2003. and after graduateed from university, I became a teacher. I have been teaching at a vocational school of xi’an for three years. And now ,I am a postgraduate student of CIAE. I will get my master degree in the next year.
Now,I will introuce my family to you. My family is really a big family. I have three elder sisters. And they all married, and have a child for each own family. My mother is a farmer,and my father is a worker of a coal mine. So you can image that our life is very tough. B

提问时间：2021-03-31

答案

第一段：拼写(afternoon),还有啊,各位老师直接用 teachers就好了.第三行,用hope后面用could比较好点吧第四行,我有一些紧张翻译成：I have a bit nervous.If there are some mistakes in my talking(或者用speech),pl...