题目

就是一篇普通的要求100词的作文,有什么语法错误,或者表达不好的地方,
The Impact of Scientific Discoveries
In 1964,the most famous discovery in the history of human being has been born at the university of Pennsylvania.That was the computer called ENIAC.Although looked big and heavy,ENIAC brought us into the "Computer Age"and then,It occurred the situation that computers appear everywhere in our life.
A great many other scientific discoveries also have large impact.They are changing our life all the time.In the last 5000 years,the human society experienced the change from brutish to civilization.This all depended on scientific discoveries.New developments in science and technology promote our living standard,lengthen our life,enrich our entertaments and make us go a step further to achieve more developements.So we can't leave scientific discoveries,unless we want to destroy ourselves.

提问时间：2021-03-31

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我的英语程度并没有很高,但是以下是我的一些意见1.第一段你用电脑的发明史来开头可是这和discovery好像有些冲突,discovery意指发现,而电脑应该是invention,因此第一段似乎是不成立的.discovery意指发现,即在已存在东...