题目

请英语高手给我修改一下这段话的错误
帮我改正下语法错误什么的...
A:Where would you like to go on vacation?
B:I want to go somewhere warm.How about you?
A:I'd like to visit Xia Men.
B:Could you tell me more about the city?
A:Sure.It's a famous tourist city with long history.
B:Oh.great! And what's your hope?
A:I hope to meet a famous peason.I think it's cool.
B:I don't think so.I want to be a policeman.
A:It's a great dream.But i think as a policeman is dangerous.
B:Yes.It's a little dangrous.
A:Bye
B:Bye

提问时间：2021-03-30

答案

第一句：where would you like to go for vacation?第六句：B:Oh.great!（衔接不太连贯） And what's your hope?表达志向理想时hope换为ideal比较好.第七句A:I hope to meet a famous peason.I think it's cool.改为...