题目

高手帮我修改下这份简历（语法.词汇.格式方面的错误）
Resume
Personal Information
Name:****
Gender:MALE
Date of Birth:1986/10/24
Residency:Shanghai
Work Experience:Student
Hukou:SHANGHAI
Address:****
Zip Code:
Self Assessment
Out-going,enthusiastic about learning,responsible and creative,finds satisfaction and pleasure in teamwork,able to communicate with supervisors and staff.
Career Objective
Type of Employment:Intern/Trainee
Desired Location:Shanghai
Desired Salary:Negotiable /Month
Desired Position:Intern
Work Experience
2007/07--2007/09：Shanghai High quality Family education Company
Industry:Education/Training
Family education Tutor
Summer arranges the family by the company to carry on the family education
2006/07--2006/09：Common people work place （Shanghai）Cultural development Limited company
Industry:Furniture/Home Appliances/Arts & Craft/Toys
Sales Regional Sales Manager
As compan

提问时间：2021-03-22

答案

Self Assessment
Out-going,enthusiastic about learning,responsible and creative,finds(你这里的主语是什么,是我的话,finds就错了.)satisfaction and pleasure in teamwork,able to communicate with supervisors and staff.（你是不是想说,和上司同事相处友好啊?如果是我,我会这么写：）
be able to communicate with supervisors and staff in perfet harmony.