题目

雅思剑桥7 test 1 小作文 看看几分
As can be seen,it can be concluded that spendings on different items in five different countries are totally different.
According to the column of Food/Drinks/Tobacco,Turkey,which is 32.14%,is the most considerable among five countries,then next is Ireland with 28.91%,followed by Spain,making up 18.80%,and finally comes Italy and Sweden at 16.36% and 15.77%.Accordingly,Turkey has the most magnificent percentage of consumer expenditure on Food/Drinks/Tobacco,and Sweden the smallest.In comparison,different nations' consumer spendings on Clothing/Footwear account for smaller percentages than ones on Food/Drinks/Tobacco.Italy has the largest amount of people of buying clothing and foorwear(9.00%); Turkey is next with 6.63%,while Spain has a very close data to Turkey(6.51%),Ireland and Sweden have 6.43% and 5.40% respectively.Ireland has approximately half of the percentage of spending on Leisure/Education of Turkey.It has 2.21%,compared with Turkey's 4.35%.Sweden has nearly twice as large as the proportion of Spain.3.22% is twice 1.98%.Italy has the similar rate with Sweden,3.20% and 3.22% separately.
Therefore,turkey spent more money on these three categories than four other countries.It takes less money for Sweden to buy three columns of products.
开头和结尾怎么样

提问时间：2021-03-22

答案

1`As it can be seen, spending on different .
2`spending可数吧
3·时态有问题,应该用过去式.
4·结尾不该用therefore,换成in total或者totally