题目

谁能帮我改改英语作文语法问题?
Socrates once said:the happiest thing in the world,than to fight for a dream.What is the dream?Think carefully,if I have forgotten their original dream?To muddle along without any aim to live I think boring life,seem to have no dreams,there seems to be no future.I ask myself I have dreams?I can answer in the affirmative,yes,I have a dream,a dream I have been buried in the heart.I hope I will not become a famous person,is not to become a famous person,but as a poor mountain area teachers,help us to those countries,for us to live in the bottom of society and the size of the children,they are not rich food,not comfortable clothes,no more good learning environment,perhaps even without a teacher,so they only poverty,kept on poverty,the children may be a lifetime will not go out of the mountains,so I tried a force of my own,to help them,if has the opportunity,I would like to be their teacher,at least tell they,don't be afraid,we are one family,we will help them,tell them not to give up their dreams,everyone has their own dream of China,is the dream of unremitting efforts,one day,dreams will be realized,as we Chinese 1300000000 Chinese dream will the realization of "wealthy and strong country"!
Each person,can have a "Chinese dream",as if everyone can look up at the starry sky,starlight in everyone's face,lit up the more abundant life,but also illuminate more splendid china.

提问时间：2021-03-16

答案

Socrates once said:the happiest thing in the world is to fight for a dream.What is a dream?I think carefully,and ask myself if Iforget the original dream?Living without an aim I think life will be so boring,Where there is no dream,there is no promising future.I ask myself if I have dreams?I can answer firmly,yes,I have a dream,but which have been buried in my heart.I do not hope to become a famous person,but a teacher of poor remote area ,who help those living in the bottom of the society .They do not have nutritional food,no comfortable clothes,no good learning environment,perhaps even without a teacher,The only thing they have is poverty,always being poverty,Some of the children may do not have the opportunity to go out of the mountain in their whole lives,so I am ready to try my utmost to help them,if there is an opportunity,I would like to be their teacher,at least tell them,don't be afraid,we are one family,we will help them,tell them not to give up their dreams,Everyone has their own dream of China.And we will work hard for it .I believe one day,this dream will be realized,we 130 billion Chinese will create a nation with wealthy and strength.
Each person,can have a "Chinese dream",This dream will serve as a star at sky,The starlight lies on everyone's face,lighting up more life as well as china.