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麻烦有英语好的帮我改改作文吧,我语法不好,估计错误会很多~
There is a heated discussion nowadays as to the issue of study into groups is better or not.Those who welcome this trend contend that it will bring about numerous benefits,while people who object to this trend hold that it will rise to number of risks.Personally,I side with the former one.
People who think that students should organized into groups to study believe that discussion with partners can exchange different information,ideas and can solve difficult problems together.They claimed that study alone can make students sleepy and make study boring.However in groups you can tell your classmates your opinion and absorb other valuable ideas to enrich your knowledge and information.With more kinds of information,study may become an interesting thing rather than a boring thing.
While,there are still many people stand against the view above-mentioned.They argue that study alone is the best method to study,it can provide a more quiet circumstance

提问时间：2021-03-15

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供参考删除括号内的文字There is a heated discussion nowadays as to (the issue of study into groups) whether the study group is better or not.Those who welcome this trend contend that it will bring abou...