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Topic:research suggests that majority of criminals who were sent to prison would commit crimes when set free.What do you think of this case?What to be done to solve this problem? 
In many parts of the world,crime problems are increasingly becoming the focus of the government and citizen concern.To me,I think that prison system and society are probably responsible for this shows for the following reasons.
The first reason we could not afford to ignore is that prison can not solve the problem completely.The person who commit a crime,will be put into jail.During this period of time in prison,expect doing some hard works,it is just remain boring.They do not reflect their wrong,but to continue doing works without any clear plan or purpose.This means that when they set free,they have not learnt any discipline or make any progress,so most of them take up their old job again.
Moreover,the social system also plays an important role on it.Even if normal people is di

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Topic:research suggests that majority of criminals who were sent to prison would commit crimes when set free.What do you think of this case?What to be done to solve this problem?In many parts of the w...