题目

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective?
我的作文
Currently,all kinds of cars have become ubiquitos and you can see various cars everywhere.Therefore,traffic congestion is becoming increasingly severe.Some people tend to think one of the most effectve measures which can combat this issue could be enhancing the price of petrol.However,I hold an against view.
Can we really address the growing traffic and pollution by boosting petrol price?As far as I am concerned,suppose we do so,it would inevitably result in a greater living pressure,those who travel to work by private cars in particular.Such as,they have to increse their budgets of petrol expenditure per month.On the other hand,enhancing the price of petrol could make carmakers lose a host of potential customers as some people maybe give up cars purchase

提问时间：2021-02-25

答案

还行