题目

高一作文请打分.30分制
第一篇：Failure Is The Mother OF The Succeess
We middle school student have had many tests or exams,AS a result,the majority of us might succeed or fail in them However,the attitudes towards failure are varying from person to person.With sorting them out,I put them into two different classifications.
the people who face the failure with positive mood will encourage themselves,and gain confidence once again so that they could correct their mistakes in no time which have been made.
On the contrary,with negative attitude,they will abandon themselves and lose their confidence.
At last,They will never spare no efforts to struggle,In my opinion,we should maintain the first kind,only in this way can we succeed at last!
第二篇
We middle school students have had many tests and exams.We have both achieved success and suffered from failure.Different students hold different attitudes to failure.
Some fall in low spirits when they don't do well in the exams.They lose heart and no longer study hard as before.
But most students take an active attitude towards failure .They find out the causes so that they will not make the similar mistakes I agree with those with active attitudes .
As we know ,Failure is the mother of the success.even great men have fail many times before the succeed So we must deal with our mistakes correctly.
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提问时间：2021-02-23

答案

从高一的教学要求来看,
第一篇24分,句子结构与语法略有些水平,但是观点阐述稍微有点不太清晰,条理略有欠缺.
第二篇22分,虽然条理清晰,但是句子结构与用词比较单调,不容易拿高分.
两篇作文都略有语法错误,不过尚不影响大局.