题目

帮忙看看下述英语句子有什么问题?

In optimistic side,when the reader confront difficulties on reading,he can use mobile phone to inquire about it.

There is a phenomenon that numerous goods are on excessive packaging,which attracts our attentions.

By doing it,I ensure that businessmen are the greatest winner.

The consumer should be sensible,don't judge a good by its excessive packaging.

I ensure that everyone is not willing to see the scene,the library become the place to play the phone,who can imagine that everybody use the phone keeping their head down in the library?
或是怎样修改下会更好,

提问时间：2021-02-19

答案

On　the　optimistic side,when the reader confront difficulties in　 reading,he can use mobile phone to inquire about it.
There is a phenomenon that numerous goods are with　excessive packaging,which absolutely　attracts our attention.
By doing so,I＇m　sure that businessmen are the greatest winner.
The consumer should be sensible　and　don't judge goods　　by its excessive packaging.
I　believethat everyone is not willing to see the library to　become the place　with　　phones． Who can imagine that everybody are　using the phones　while　keeping their mindsin the library?