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Dear friend,
When we learned over the radio that the Autonomous Prefecture of Yushu hit by a terrible earthquake on the April 14th,2010,killed more than2,000 people,we became very worried.It is said that many houses were ruined,so you couldn't have your classes as usually.I wonder if things have improve by now.
As for yourself,don't give in hope and be strongminded when facing the great difficult because of people all over the country is standing by you.And please keep in touch with me and I will try my best to help you.Beside,the government is trying to
help the people in the disaster-hit areas rebuild their home.I believe the day will soon come that you overcome all the difficultes and live the new life.
Hope to get your early reply.

提问时间：2021-02-18

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When we learned over the radio that the Autonomous Prefecture of Yushu（此处加 was,应该用被动语态,看介词by） hit by a terrible earthquake on the (去掉,习惯用法.此处不用冠词 )April 14th,2010,killed（改...