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As the pace of modern life continues to quicken, the stress seems to be on the increase all the time. Stress is a fact of life but there are a number of ways people can alter the lifestyle to cope better with stress and I prefer sleeping.
Firstly, we renew our strength in sleep. People will work with tired and Inefficiency if they are short of rest, which is the source of stress and accident. Secondly, it allows the brain to recover from the rigor of the day. The brain can’t function properly when it's sleep-deprived. A high-quality sleep brings a good mood while a bad one causes a black-letter day.
In conclusion, sleeping was, is and will be the best way of relaxing.
Try to get into a routine of going to bed and waking at the same time for one week and the difference will be obvious.

提问时间：2021-02-12

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