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The Celebration of Western Festivals
Recently,a lot of people prefer taking some western festivals in China.We can see that there are many lovers with roses on streets and parks on 2.14.And people take Thanks Day and so on now in China.
The reasons of the phenomenon lie in several aspects.The main reason is that chinese polity and economy are being global.China has many connection with many counties in a lot of respects,besides culture.What is more ,nearly all festivals of other countries are showed in films and books.,and they help people to learn about it easily,Because cultures are different in not same background of histories,they can attract more and more people,especially for youngers.
There are two respects affections from the phenomenon.For one thing ,people can learn about many counties’histories and cultures through western festivals.But ,other,some people may pursue foreign things excessively in order to forget chinese culture,while it isn’t what we want to see.

提问时间：2021-02-10

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Rencently,people show their preference to some western festivals in China.There are so many examples to list,lovers ,holding roses in parks or streets ,wait for their heart persons in 2.14.Also,Thanks Giving Day is anonther one people appeal to take.
When we explore this phonomenon ,some underlying factors emerge.But the following are the most crucial ones.Firstly,as the development of national economy,the connect between China an other countries is not only politics but culture.Secondly,films and books from western countries have a drastic influence on our Chinese,especially for the youngers.They'd like to know more about their adoles.such as 007.Last but not leat,some festivals in western countries are so interesting,take April Fool's Day for example,people can play jokes to others.
Although we come to several problems,such as ignorence of national festivas,along with this tendency,it's reasonable for us to believe this problems will be solved in the near future with the arising awareness of public towards national festivals.