题目

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Directions:Suppose you are a college student,write an email to apply for a student loan.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a sophomore from Administration Department of our university. I am writing to apply for a student loan from our university.
Firstly, my family can not afford my tuition, because i have two brothers and sisters studying in middle school and my parents salary barely cover household expenses.Therefore,I would like to relieve my family burden through applying for a student loan.In addition, I have been working hard in my study all the way and achieved outstanding scores.So,I think my qualifications meet the student loan role.
I am looking forward to your early reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your kind assistance in this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

提问时间：2021-02-08

答案

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a sophomore from Administration Department of our university. I am writing to apply for a student loan.
Firstly, my family can not afford my tuition, because i have two brothers and one sister studying in middle school and my parents' salaries barely cover the household expenses.Therefore,I would like to lighten my family's financial burden through applying for a student loan.In addition, I have been working hard in my study all the time and I have got outstanding achievements.So,I think I am qualified to be an applicant.
I am looking forward to your early reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your kind assistance in this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming