题目

帮我修改我这篇英语百字短文
who am i
1．帮我找找有没有不准的用词,不恰当的句子,还有语法错误
尤其是第三第四句,我觉得别扭.
2．最好能帮我在想几个和第三到第六句类似的句子.
3．我不太自信,高一写成这样能交上去么?是不是不好吖……
I’m a student,a normal student.
I’m not gold in other’s eyes,but I’d like to be myself truly.
I once sought to be a top student,but I failed in an exam.
I once made myself learn history carefully,but I kept sleeping in the next class.
I once wandered to see a beautiful rainbow,but the stream came first.
I once dreamed my colorful happy future,but I had to face the boring classes the next morning
Maybe,now,the life for me is just like sailing in the roaring waves,climbing up a high snow mountain,and walking across a large desert.I have to struggle for my own future,and I always believed that the peace ocean after the stream is the most fascinating,the view I see on the top of the mountain is the most beautiful,and the first oases I find in the desert is
最后几个词是the most verdant

提问时间：2021-02-02

答案

恩,能写成这样算你有水平拉,我也是高一的,自愧不如啊.I’m not gold in other’s eyes,but I’d like to be myself truly 你是不是想说 我在别人眼里不是天才[金子],可是我只想做我自己,或许可以改成:Maybe i am not...